QUOTE(shivani @ Sep 21 2005, 12:10 PM)
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dhanyavAdAh vivekah, kintu etat tava vishAla hrudayam vadati. satyam vadAmi, mama samskrutam bahu durbalam. shanai shanai samskrutAdhyayanam karishyAmi. tvam kim kAraNEna nirAshah bhavati. tvamapi praVInah kila. tava pravINatvE vishwAsmapi nAsti va. prayatnam kuru vivekah.
VibhAsah
dhanyavad vivek, kintu aapka hridya vishaal hai . satya to ye hai ki meri sanskrit bahut kamzor hai. thodi thodi snaskrit karishyami ==?? . tum kisliye nirashajanak baatein kar rahe ho tum swayam behad kushal ho . (didnt understand that one sentence ). prayatna karte raho bas.
shivAnI, tava prayatnArtham anekAbhinandanAni svIkuru.
Your translation was close. Here's what I meant to write (might have made errors in my sankrit):
dhanyavAdAh vivekah, kintu etat tava vishAla hrudayam vadati. = dhanyavad vivek, kintu yeh aapka vishaal hriday bol raha hai .
satyam vadAmi, mama samskrutam bahu durbalam. = sach keh raha hoon, meri sanskrit bahut kamzor hai.
shanai shanai samskrutAdhyayanam karishyAmi. = dheere dheere sanskrit ki padhaai kar raha hoon.
tvam kim kAraNEna nirAshah bhavati. = tum kis wajah se niraash ho rahe ho ?
tvamapi praVInah kila = tum bhi to qaabil ho na ?
tava pravINatvE vishwAsmapi nAsti va. = kya tumhe apni qaabiliyat par vishwas bhi nahiin hai ?
prayatnam kuru vivekah = koshish karo vivek.