Amod's Lyrics/ Kishoreda's Song (pal Pal Dil Ke Paas) Options

[Amaanush]

Amod and HFM friends,

Here is an attempt at Amod's lyrics for hum bhi dil ka haal based on Kishoreda's pal pal dil ke paas.
Gustakhi Maaf cos I added a hein to the first line. I had lot of fun singing this song to your lyrics. Will appreciate your feedbacks

Regards
Amaanush

[Amod]

Amod and HFM friends,

Here is an attempt at Amod's lyrics for hum bhi dil ka haal based on Kishoreda's pal pal dil ke paas.
Gustakhi Maaf cos I added a hein to the first line. I had lot of fun singing this song to your lyrics. Will appreciate your feedbacks

Regards
Amaanush

Vijay,

i really enjoyed your rendering!

What i am about to say / write may be too ambitious ...

But ...

i imagine if THE GREAT KK had sung this song he would have given similar vocal expressions in his rendering.

BTW, i admit, the 'hein' feels OK ... no .... it actually feels GOOD.

In the last stanza (which was actually written only for fun) has the words:

dil taar taar thaa phir bhi

The 'Taar Taar' actually is as in 'Aar Paar' (Taar Taar means 'torn in shreds' or devastated )

Thanks, for all the efforts. You were extremely good (i mean it).
Lets hope we will partner in many such creations.

Take care.

Amod

[sanjkash]

Amod and HFM friends,

Here is an attempt at Amod's lyrics for hum bhi dil ka haal based on Kishoreda's pal pal dil ke paas.
Gustakhi Maaf cos I added a hein to the first line. I had lot of fun singing this song to your lyrics. Will appreciate your feedbacks

Regards
Amaanush

Amaanush,
Excellent effort. Voice is also close to Kishoreda. Some more fine tuning and you would make lines (off course together with Amod). Keep it up.
Sanjay

[OMkar]

Hey Amanush, u have gr8 voice... Very manly like Kishoreda!!! Good try dude!!! How did u record? at home or on Karaoke set? I welcome you to our Mehfil thread in GURU's forum, click here http://www.hamaraforums.com/index.php?show...mp;#entry400712

[Amaanush]

Hi Amod, Sanjkash, Omkar,

First of all thanks for downloading and listening to the song. The file turned out to be a little larger than expected. Your feedbacks have been very encouraging.

Amod: I laughed when you pointed out the taar taar flub. Lesson learnt. When in doubt ask the man with the mighty pen. It does need fine tuning as Sanjkash mentioned and other gaffes here and there.

Omkar: Recorded this at home. Used m-audio premobile usb audio interface, sm58 mic and a recording software called mixcraft from acoustica. I was amused by you asking if it was done in a studio or home. Still learning the basics of mixing which is so essential for the final output.

Regards
Vijay

[OMkar]

Hi Amod, Sanjkash, Omkar,

First of all thanks for downloading and listening to the song. The file turned out to be a little larger than expected. Your feedbacks have been very encouraging.

Amod: I laughed when you pointed out the taar taar flub. Lesson learnt. When in doubt ask the man with the mighty pen. It does need fine tuning as Sanjkash mentioned and other gaffes here and there.

Omkar: Recorded this at home. Used m-audio premobile usb audio interface, sm58 mic and a recording software called mixcraft from acoustica. I was amused by you asking if it was done in a studio or home. Still learning the basics of mixing which is so essential for the final output.

Regards
Vijay

Good Show!! Expecting lot more from you now!!

[sanjkash]

Vijay, Omkar,
We are all excited to get more of your voice in future. If you (or anyone from HF) need any track (karaoke) let me know. Although, I do not have a big track collection, I will try my best to get to you (or anyone from HF). Keep it up. Amod is very talented and hungree to get started with good singers, so please take profit, have fun, enjoy and entertain all of us.
Omkar,
Aapke gaane bhi recently soone. Bahot achche lage. Aapki aawaz bhi sureli hai. Keep it up.
Sanjay

[HumTum]

Amod and HFM friends,

Here is an attempt at Amod's lyrics for hum bhi dil ka haal based on Kishoreda's pal pal dil ke paas.
Gustakhi Maaf cos I added a hein to the first line. I had lot of fun singing this song to your lyrics. Will appreciate your feedbacks

Regards
Amaanush

Amaanushbhai. Awesum! You are mixture of Father and Son's voices.

[azad]

Amod and HFM friends,

Here is an attempt at Amod's lyrics for hum bhi dil ka haal based on Kishoreda's pal pal dil ke paas.
Gustakhi Maaf cos I added a hein to the first line. I had lot of fun singing this song to your lyrics. Will appreciate your feedbacks

Regards
Amaanush

Amaanushbhai. Awesum! You are mixture of Father and Son's voices.

Absolutely.

[Amaanush]

Humtum and Azaad bhai,
Thank you for listening and leaving your feedbacks. It means a lot! I am sure we will be running into each other all the time on HFM. And by the way, I know that you guys sing too. If you have some recordings, let me know. Would love to hear them.
Regards
Vijay

[Amaanush]

Vijay, Omkar,
We are all excited to get more of your voice in future. If you (or anyone from HF) need any track (karaoke) let me know. Although, I do not have a big track collection, I will try my best to get to you (or anyone from HF). Keep it up. Amod is very talented and hungree to get started with good singers, so please take profit, have fun, enjoy and entertain all of us.
Omkar,
Aapke gaane bhi recently soone. Bahot achche lage. Aapki aawaz bhi sureli hai. Keep it up.
Sanjay

Hi Sanjay,
Thanks for your offer of tracks. I have a few limited ones too collected over a year from some generous friends here and other sites. Let me know if you are looking for any tracks in particular.
I too heard Omkar's songs today and what a way to start the morning. He definitely stirred emotions in me listening to Chingari koi Bhadake and Dukhi Mann mere. Very well done.
Regards
Vijay

[OMkar]

Vijay, Omkar,
We are all excited to get more of your voice in future. If you (or anyone from HF) need any track (karaoke) let me know. Although, I do not have a big track collection, I will try my best to get to you (or anyone from HF). Keep it up. Amod is very talented and hungree to get started with good singers, so please take profit, have fun, enjoy and entertain all of us.
Omkar,
Aapke gaane bhi recently soone. Bahot achche lage. Aapki aawaz bhi sureli hai. Keep it up.
Sanjay

Hi Sanjay,
Thanks for your offer of tracks. I have a few limited ones too collected over a year from some generous friends here and other sites. Let me know if you are looking for any tracks in particular.
I too heard Omkar's songs today and what a way to start the morning. He definitely stirred emotions in me listening to Chingari koi Bhadake and Dukhi Mann mere. Very well done.
Regards
Vijay

Hi Amaanush, tanks a lot for your encourgagement. Wish I can spend lot of time in singing and upload more and more for admirers like you, Amanush... I think I also heard ur 'mere mehboob qayamat'... I have it saved in my 'singing friends' folder. Can u please upload some more of ur songs in our 'GURU and Chela' thread?

And all others also welcome to participate in that thread which is in Kishore Kumar forum. Lets make it a memorable mehfil.. Ravi suggested some idea of self introduction on 2nd or 3rd page of that thread. Why dont we introduced ourselves... Eager to hear ur voice, guys!!! Hey Amaanush, give it a kick start man!!