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simplefable |
Oct 15 2007, 03:32 AM
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And then, all her doubts disappeared into thin air, as the door slowly swung open to show the face of the man. A face.....
After silence that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music.
Aldous Huxley "Waqt ne kiya...Kya haseen sitm...Tum rahe na tum..Hum rahe na hum.." geetadutt noorjehan shamshadbegum Anmol Fankaar |
mmuk2004 |
Oct 15 2007, 04:22 AM
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that seemed quiet, almost familiar... she had nothing to fear there and she almost reached out in her eagerness, when she felt something alerting her to the intense, almost blind sadness etched in the curve of his polite smile...
"This isn't right, this isn't even wrong." Wolfgang Pauli (1900-1958) "There are no facts, only interpretations." Friedrich Nietzsche (1844-1900) |
IDOL |
Oct 15 2007, 11:39 PM
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that seemed quiet, almost familiar... she had nothing to fear there and she almost reached out in her eagerness, when she felt something alerting her to the intense, almost blind sadness etched in the curve of his polite smile... " What is he trying to hide behind that polite smile?" she thought. .......................................................................
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Marcilo |
Oct 16 2007, 01:59 AM
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There was a mysterious smile on his face and he whispered to her "shall we?"
- Just another gummy bear fan
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Mandrake |
Oct 16 2007, 06:52 AM
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She smiled eagerly. "Yes, lets."
He gently led her to the kitchen... Self - belief is the most potent force.
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simplefable |
Oct 16 2007, 07:51 AM
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She smiled eagerly. "Yes, lets." He gently led her to the kitchen... ( kitchen? not a Hotel or a pub..or a dancing hall? ) And in the kitchen she saw her, a pretty little thing... After silence that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music.
Aldous Huxley "Waqt ne kiya...Kya haseen sitm...Tum rahe na tum..Hum rahe na hum.." geetadutt noorjehan shamshadbegum Anmol Fankaar |
lakshmi |
Oct 16 2007, 08:06 AM
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She nervously opened the box. The box contained a beautiful diamond engagement ring. He saw the ring and took a deep breath. |
simplefable |
Oct 16 2007, 08:38 AM
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And in the kitchen she saw her, a pretty little thing... She nervously opened the box. The box contained a beautiful diamond engagement ring. He saw the ring and took a deep breath. Then she said to the pretty little girl sitting on the kitchen stool..." Baby, i know that you love your father, but would you care to share him with me " ? After silence that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music.
Aldous Huxley "Waqt ne kiya...Kya haseen sitm...Tum rahe na tum..Hum rahe na hum.." geetadutt noorjehan shamshadbegum Anmol Fankaar |
Mandrake |
Oct 16 2007, 08:50 AM
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The little girl looked confused. "Father??" There was a question-mark on her face...
Self - belief is the most potent force.
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simplefable |
Oct 16 2007, 08:58 AM
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The little girl looked confused. "Father??" There was a question-mark on her face... The woman looked at him with a question , trying to understand . After silence that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music.
Aldous Huxley "Waqt ne kiya...Kya haseen sitm...Tum rahe na tum..Hum rahe na hum.." geetadutt noorjehan shamshadbegum Anmol Fankaar |
Mandrake |
Oct 16 2007, 09:51 AM
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Suddenly, her heartbeats went up. "What exactly is happening here?" Her face grew pale.
Self - belief is the most potent force.
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Marcilo |
Oct 16 2007, 09:19 PM
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So she thought, has he told his daughter all about her of she was the one who knew her all along…. Men… why do they do this
- Just another gummy bear fan
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simplefable |
Oct 16 2007, 09:22 PM
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Even as she was thinking on these lines, the pretty little girl got up and came to her and with a pointed finger, touched her cheek...
After silence that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music.
Aldous Huxley "Waqt ne kiya...Kya haseen sitm...Tum rahe na tum..Hum rahe na hum.." geetadutt noorjehan shamshadbegum Anmol Fankaar |
IDOL |
Oct 17 2007, 01:02 AM
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Even as she was thinking on these lines, the pretty little girl got up and came to her and with a pointed finger, touched her cheek... "you look like my Barbie, " said she. .......................................................................
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lakshmi |
Oct 17 2007, 01:51 AM
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"Barbie", Shouted the woman. " Are you comparing me to that mattel doll?'' She turned to the man and asked,"who is this little brat ?"
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