My New Composition (scratch Recording In My Voice), Song type: Vintage Hindi Options

[Amod]

Hi All,

Participating after a long time.

Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back.

It was visualized as sung by Lata ji.

Will be glad to know your views (critical).

Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident,
just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune.


CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai
Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai?

Thanks.

Amod



This post has been edited by Amod: Sep 6 2009, 05:56 PM

[Amod]

Hi all,

One new happening ..... May be .... Talat & Madan Mohan Combo ... atleast thats what i felt in THE dream

The lyrics ...

Khushi me, Gham me teri yaad leke jhumenge
Piyee bhi na ho magar, yaad leke jhumenge

Ghazal Ghazal me basaate use hai hum aaye
Umeed ke wohi ashiyaar leke jhumenge

Sharab se bhi nahi jab chadhe khumaar hame
Usi nazar ki wo saugaat leke jhumenge

Wo hasi pal, jo mere pyar ne kamaye hai
Usi daulat ko sar-e-aam leke jhumenge

Kabhi na jaan sake hum tumhari fitrat ko
Hu.aa badnaam jo hai naam leke jhumenge

Amod

As usual ..... Awaiting your comments..


p.s. i am not a professional singer! Just a postman trying to deliver something from 'THAT WORLD' to our world!