My New Composition (scratch Recording In My Voice), Song type: Vintage Hindi Options

[Amod]

Hi All,

Participating after a long time.

Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back.

It was visualized as sung by Lata ji.

Will be glad to know your views (critical).

Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident,
just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune.


CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai
Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai?

Thanks.

Amod



This post has been edited by Amod: Sep 6 2009, 05:56 PM

[Faraaj73]

Hi All,

Participating after a long time.

Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back.

It was visualized as sung by Lata ji.

Will be glad to know your views (critical).

Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident,
just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune.


CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai
Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai?

Thanks.

Amod

Amod Ji

Honestly speaking, without being polite, I have to say I like the tune and mood it creates - very hummable and gentle paced. Lyrics have never been of that much interest to me so can't comment on them.

I will say though, that your natural singing voice is very good. If you took singing lessons (quite a few lessons ), you really wouldn't need to visualise someone else singing this.

[Amod]

Hi All,

Participating after a long time.

Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back.

It was visualized as sung by Lata ji.

Will be glad to know your views (critical).

Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident,
just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune.


CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai
Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai?

Thanks.

Amod

Amod Ji

Honestly speaking, without being polite, I have to say I like the tune and mood it creates - very hummable and gentle paced. Lyrics have never been of that much interest to me so can't comment on them.

I will say though, that your natural singing voice is very good. If you took singing lessons (quite a few lessons ), you really wouldn't need to visualise someone else singing this.

Faraaj,

Thanks for your comments.

Since i do not consider myself a singer (which is good), whenever i write & compose a vintage
hindi film song (of course just as a hobby), i have to visualize the picturisation, the actors & actressess,
the playback singers (Kishore da, Rafi Saheb, Mukesh, Talat, Lata etc) in order to setup the mood, so to say.

And then the words & tune materialize. And my tunes are such that its out of my own capacity to sing!

Regards,

Amod

This post has been edited by Amod: Sep 17 2009, 01:46 PM