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My New Composition (scratch Recording In My Voice)

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> My New Composition (scratch Recording In My Voice), Song type: Vintage Hindi
Amod
post Sep 6 2009, 05:36 PM
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Hi All,

Participating after a long time.

Uploading a song i wrote & composed a few weeks back.

It was visualized as sung by Lata ji.

Will be glad to know your views (critical).

Please ignore the singing lapses, which are quite evident,
just concentrate on the song's mood, lyrics & tune.


CharaagoN se zara kehde, baDee lambee judaa_ee hai
Mere ashkoN ko woh gar goad le, to kyaa buraa_ee hai?


Thanks.

Amod



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A good try and nice wordings!


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A good try and nice wordings!


Erum ji,

Thanks a lot for your appreciation.

Whatever i have sung is different from what i intend the tune to be .. that is to say
that apart from not being in 'sur', i have not been able to sing the various 'harkats' that
are there in the composition.

If i were to teach this song to a professional (and talented) singer to sing, i would
preferably play it on the harmonium (which i have already done). Secondly this
song is a female's expression and has to be sung by a female artist.

BTW i heard your songs on your thread. You have a good clear voice. Keep singing
and posting. (even will love to hear this song [charagoN se...] in your voice)

Regards,

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