Some Thing Different Now ...., Lyrics (Can any one sing this for me?) Options

[Amod]

Hi All,

Some thing different now:

The Salilda composition from the film 'Eik Gao Ki Kahaani', sung by Talat Saheb, is one of my all time favorites:


Raat nay kyaa kyaa khwaab dikhaaye
Rang bharay sou jaal bichhaaye
AnkheN khulee to, sapnay Tu_Tay
Reh gaye gham kay kaaley saaye

Raat nay kyaa kyaa khwaab dikhaaye ...


I dreamt of completely new words, sung by Talat saheb, on the same tune.

Any of the HM members, who can sing, may try singing these words in the same tune, and if possible upload their recorded song here.

Here are the words:




Humnay bhi afsaanay su_naaye
Kuch logoN_kay naam jo aaye
Labz ye kaapeN, hoNTh silay thay
Khulay jo saamnay jaam ye aaye


Humnay bhi afsaanay su_naaye ...


Kaun iss dilko phir behelaataa?
Bhujhay diye ko phirsay jalaataa? (2)
Shee_shay say Tu_Tay, phirbhi khelay
Raakh say koi dil kyuN lagaaye?


Humnay bhi afsaanay su_naaye ...

(Yeh agli lines MAI (jaam) say kahi jaa rahi hai)


Tum kyuN meray yaar banay ho?
Shaam kaa kyuN deedaar baney ho? (2)
Mujhpay sitam tum naa karnaa kam
Gham ki aadat Yu_hee na jaaye


Humnay bhi afsaanay su_naaye ...


Ab kyuN unkaa zikr KareiN Hum?
Kyaa baaki jo unse kaheiN hum?
Dil ki yeH baateiN, dil na suney to ..?
Hum hi paagal kyuN kehelaayeiN?


Hum ne bhi afsaaney sunaayeiN!




As usual your comments are most welcome.

Amod

[ravikumarofindia]

Amod here is an attempt (sounds weird and not to the mark ).

With two paras, recorded with mobile, edited with goldwave.

May be someone else will do justice to your lyrics.

2:54@128Kbps

[Amod]

Amod here is an attempt (sounds weird and not to the mark ).

With two paras, recorded with mobile, edited with goldwave.

May be someone else will do justice to your lyrics.

2:54@128Kbps

RAVIKUMAR!

You have a good voice.

Your attempt is indeed commendable.

You opted to sing even without a scale guidance (i.e. without the 'SA' of your scale playing)
and that is difficult.

I suggest that you give another try with the 'SA' playing in the background, as most singers do while singing adlib (i.e. without orchestra), which helps them in remaining in the same scale throughout the song.

Thank-you.

Regards,

Amod