My Own Lyrics & Compositions Options

[Amod]

Hi All,

I have being seeing & hearing songs in my dreams of and on. On the rare occasions when i remember the song after waking up, i have tried to put it on paper, both the notations as well as the lyrics. These songs have never existed otherwise. You call this a gift.

Some such songs, i have had them sung by professional singers (of course those that i have an access to and can afford). I am uploading one of the song.

This song that i dreamt of was sort of typical Hindi film piano song. The hero was Randhir Kapoor and it was sung by Kishore Kumar!

Here it is:

The lyrics and composition is mine.

Song: Kehna hai unse ye kehna
Singer: Jitendra Abhyankar
Bit: 56kbps (Sorry about that, but still the quality is good)
Duration: 03:53
Year of recording: 2000

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod

p.s.

Only in 2002, i dreamt of one more stanza from the same song (a slow & sad one) so it did not get included in the above song.

[Dhananjay]

This is a song which has not been formally recorded in a studio. (it is without orchestra).

As you listen to this, just imagine Lata Mangeshkar's vintage voice..

Your comments are most welcome.

Amod

Amod,
An amazing song once again !!!!
To me, this was the best of the songs uploaded till now. I didn't read your message before I started listening to the song and I assumed that lack of orchestration was intentional (somehow it seemed natural for song's theme).
My favorite piece in the song, was the little twist that you have given to the word "aayein" (in the line - "phir se aana jab woh aayein").
The only thing that may need improvement are the lyrics (Again, for a one-man-music-house that you are, it would be too much to expect that you excel in all aspects of the songs. If I ever composed music, my songs won't have even a tenth of sweetness as yours.. )

Kudos to you man

-Dhananjay